Pets.ca - Pet forum for dogs cats and humans 

-->

writing an article

Akira
October 1st, 2009, 10:57 AM
Hi everyone, i'm writing an article on abandoned and abused animals, why not to give up your pets and what not. So if anyone could point me in the direction of some good links to get thorough info and ideas from i'd really appreciate it.

Thanks! :D


P.S. I have to write a few different pieces to get this job im hoping for, poetry isn't really my thing but I just wrote this and I'd like some constructive criticism if anyone is willing to dish it out.

:o

Do I really deserve this? I'm only five weeks old.
This cardboard box is so wet and cold.
Brother won't wake up, and sis can't stop shaking.
My stomach just won't stop aching.
Where is my mommy, I haven't eaten in days.
Everythings turning into a dark grey haze.
My eyes are heavy, it's hard to stand.
Do I really deserve this? I don't understand.